Showing posts with label young adult. Show all posts
Showing posts with label young adult. Show all posts

Saturday, February 20, 2016

A Universal Divide, both Social and Spatial


An unsolicited review of Across the Universe by Beth Revis
Across the Universe, by Beth Revis, is a Young Adult dystopian novel about a 300-year mission to settle a new home on Centauri-Earth because resources on Sol-Earth have been depleted. The story is told from the first-person point-of-view of two teenagers. Amy was born on Earth and raised in a traditional family. Elder was cloned on the space ship, Godspeed, during its trip and doesn’t understand the concept of family. The chapters alternate between these two main characters to set up the contrast between Earth-that-was and the social changes that have occurred during the multi-generational trip.

The story’s opening grabs the audience with Amy facing a teenagers’ worst fears: leaving her home, her boyfriend, losing her parents, and seeing them naked. Amy’s mother is a scientist renowned for her genetic splicing work, which will help grow crops in the alien soil. She’s essential to the mission and must go. Her father is a battlefield analyst in the Army, a tertiary figure in the overall goal to claim a new planet for humanity. Amy’s mother wants her to go with them, so thinks Amy should be the first to be processed in the cryogenics chambers. Amy’s father insists that Mom goes first so Amy can see the process. And what a process it is! Amy sees her mother naked for the first time and it surprised by “her…rice-paper-thin” skin and “her stomach [which] sagged in a wrinkly sort of way that made her look even more vulnerable and weak.” No wonder Amy is disconcerted by the workers’ indifference while processing Mom in a clear cryo box that looks like a coffin. These uncaring workers pierce Mom’s pale skin with IV needles and simple say, “Relax,” which is “not a kind suggestion.” The fluid in the IV bag is as thick as honey and Mom “hissed in pain… [her eyes] filled with water.” If that weren’t bad enough, the second IV bag is filled with “blue goo… [that] glowed…her eyes were clamped shut, two hot tears dangling on her lashes.” As the indifferent worker squeezes the IV bag to force the fluid faster, Mom bites her lip until it bleeds and she “whimper[s], soft, like a dying kitten.” Watching Mom in the cryo bed reminds Amy of another coffin when she was “looking down at Grandma last year at the church, when we all said goodbye.” The workers are impatient to “get on with it” as they push lens into Mom’s eyes with “big, calloused” hands. Then they force three thick tubes down Mom’s throat and the cryo bed fills with “water flecked with sky-blue sparkles.” After watching this terrifying process, Daddy surprises Amy by giving her a choice of whether to go through the cryo process and travel to the new planet with them or to stay on Earth with her aunt and friends. He then goes through the process himself, leaving Amy to choose without parental input. The choice between the familiarities of the life she’s known or the uncertain life that would keep Amy with her parents is difficult. Dad giving Amy this choice shows he respects her as a young adult. It’s an adult choice thrust upon on a teenager, but what teenager doesn’t want that respect from their parents? Both prospects seem terrifying to Amy, however she chooses to go with her parents. Amy’s goes through the painful freezing process, consoling herself with, “At least I’ll sleep. I will forget, for three hundred and one years, everything else.” But Amy’s cryogenic state is anything but unconscious. She thinks about her old life and floats in an uncertain consciousness the entire time she’s frozen.
By contrast, Elder doesn’t have a choice which path his life takes. He was cloned specifically to be the next leader of the Godspeed as it hurdles half-way through its journey to Centauri-Earth. The ship is divided into different levels and the only the current and future leaders are allowed on the Keeper Level. Eldest and Elder share this level, but not all the knowledge of its workings. The Shipper Level is only for those who maintain the ship and the Feeder Level is for the simpler farmers and their fields. Though the ship is huge, it’s still confining for the growing population, so privacy and closed doors are greatly respected. Therefore there are no locked doors on Godspeed… except one. Eldest keeps his room locked and keeps secrets that are important for Elder to know as future leader. Eldest has also kept Elder from seeing the great engine that powers the ship and the hatches through which the stars can be viewed. And certain files about the Plague that wiped out a large portion of the population. It’s little wonder that 16-year-old Elder is frustrated by his mentor’s secretiveness. Eldest reluctantly reveals his secrets one at a time and only as needed for training his student. It is a sign that Eldest lacks respect and trust for Elder. Though the people see Eldest as a compassionate protector who is always kind to them, Elder sees his flashes of rage and his threatening demeanor. The tension between Elder and Eldest is apparent and we know there is trouble brewing.

The previous leaders of Godspeed tried to eliminate potential trouble among their people by altering them to be the same. Everyone on the ship has “the same olive skin, the same dark brown hair and eyes” and speak the same language. However, the leaders couldn’t have predicted that someone would thaw the cryo tube sleepers early, killing some and leaving only one alive. Amy is thawed and almost dies during the unsanctioned awakening. Her creamy white skin and flaming red hair are a curiosity and a danger to the mono-ethnic stability of Godspeed. The introduction of someone so different upsets Eldest and he tries to keep Amy under wraps in the hospital. What upsets Eldest more is that Elder is captivated by Amy’s stark differences in appearance and her fiery temper, which causes her to stand up against Eldest. Elder and Amy form a friendship that angers Eldest. He wants to keep them apart so Elder’s vision for Godspeed will the same as his. What is worse, Elder sneaks Amy out of the hospital to explore the ship and together they secretly investigate the murders of the other sleepers.
The plot moves smoothly from one crisis to another, leaving small clues as to the next predicament awaiting the two teenagers. It is resplendent with description of the new culture that has evolved over generations in space, but not to the point of being a distraction to the reader. I recommend this book, not only to young readers, but to adults who sometimes need a simpler read without impediments. My sister recommended this book to me, so I, in turn, recommend it to you.

Happy reading until the next book review. If you care to join me, I’ll be reading Red Rising by Pierce Brown. Please don’t forget to add your comments agreeing or disagreeing with my opinion and adding your take on the story.

Thursday, March 13, 2014

Red River Runs True to Form



Title: Red River
Author(s): Kelly Van Hull
Publisher: Kelly Van Hull
Copyright: 2013
ASBN: BOOGQLNDOG
Format: market paperback & ebook
Genre: Young Adult Dystopian
Part of Series: Book Two in the Tent City Series
Rating: 3 out of 5 stars

Kelly Van Hull continues to keep our attention in the Second Book of the Tent City Series: Red River. Many writers of dystopian fiction can fall out of balance between maintaining realism versus “crossing the line” in the sequel. However, Van Hull maintains a realistic balance in this novel for young adults despite her apocalyptic theme, the Biblical references to end of times plagues and the “advancements” which empower some of the characters. Continuity is maintained between the first and second books with the first-person point of view narration through the eyes of 17-year-old Dani. We learn that Dani’s 5-year-old brother, Brody, is the prophesized “Golden Child”. Dani’s determined to protect Brody by keeping his identity secret, even from their friends in Tent City. Like Van Hull, Dani is doing a balancing act. Dani is still undecided about her feeling for the brothers, Bentley and Jack, but that’s the least of her worries.

The novel opens with Dani discovering that Brody has the mark of the Golden Child as the young people from Tent City, along with Dani’s mother and father are on their way back to Tent City. The second plague occurs as they cross the river, which has turned to blood. This means that Bentley and Jack’s father, General Burke, can no longer be called a religious lunatic, he’s right! They now know they must face the remaining plagues soon. However, even concern about the plagues must be put on the back burner because winter in the Black Hills is approaching and they need a new camp.

The plot pacing is enjoyable, as Dani and Bentley search for a winter camp, but for me it’s just a backdrop for the inner conflict which Dani faces as she wavers between the pouting teenager whose parents are “in charge” and the strong young woman she is becoming. I like that her protectiveness of Brody keeps her firmly rooted in her own strength and that she constantly battles her own temper when she is forced to share the camp with the infamous General Burke. New characters are smoothly introduced into the sequel and flesh it out to create a lively conflict for Dani’s inner conflict. A few surprising twists toward the end makes us wonder what will happen in the third book to this trilogy.

Though I enjoyed Kelly Van Hull’s second book, Red River, it didn’t capture my attention as much as the first book, Tent City, which I gave five stars. It’s still a good read, though, and I highly recommend it for the young people and adults who are following Van Hull’s series.



Thursday, August 29, 2013

Rapture Trilogy: Not as Enrapturing as Hoped

An Author-Requested Review


Title: Rapture
Author(s): Phillip W. Simpson
Publisher: Arete Publishing
Copyright: 2010
ISBN-10: 148394963X
ISBN-13: 978-1483949635
Format: ebook
Genre: Young Adult Dystopian
Part of Series: Part I of Rapture Trilogy
Rating: 2 1/2 out of 5

Phillip W. Simpson’s young adult novel, Rapture Trilogy, paints a dystopian world after the Biblical Rapture has occurred and the believers have been taken to heaven. Written in third-person, limited point-of-view we follow the teenaged protagonist, Sam, through a demon-infested landscape where the sun is blotted out, the moon is red as blood and ash continually falls from the sky, contaminating exposed water and food. Sam’s goal is to reach Los Angeles from his home in Jacob’s Ladder, Utah. Along the way he battles demon’s, trying to help the unbelievers left behind and fights beside the survivors holed up in caves and old businesses that remain standing after the earthquakes. But Sam is up to the challenge because he’s half-demon, half-human so has superior strength and speed coupled with life-long training in martial arts using the katana (long blade) & wakizashi (short blade). Of course, he has horns, which makes gaining survivors’ trust more difficult. Along the way, Sam befriends Joshua, who agrees to travel with him to Los Angeles, and together they save a girl named Grace from a group of roughen survivors. This unlikely trio makes their way across the brutal, post-Rapture landscape.

Simpson uses alternating chapters to give Sam’s background, which works well in telling us about Hikari and his daughter, Aimi who Sam loves, but slows the action a bit. His descriptions of both the setting and the fight scenes are engaging, but his characters lack depth. For instance, Sam is raised by Hikari, his sensei or teacher/foster-father who is, by all accounts in the novel, perfect. We learn through the flashbacks that Hikari takes Sam in as an infant from a Christian mother who was seduced by a demon. Hikari devotes his life to Sam’s martial arts training and Biblical education. Though Hikari was once a teacher, we have no idea how he supports Sam and Aimi. He seems to always be at home, that is when he’s not at church. How he provides for his family is a complete mystery. Aimi is also portrayed to perfection. She’s an obedient daughter who happily takes on the responsibility of cooking and cleaning for two men. On top of her household chores, Hikari trains Aimi in the martial arts almost as rigorously as he trains Sam, and all the while she maintains academic excellence and superior cheerleading skills. Excelling at everything she does is a bit unrealistic. No wonder Sam loves her, she is perfection incarnate. Neither Aimi nor Sam displays the rebellious nature that occurs in 98% of American teenagers. As an ex-high school teacher, I found that lack a little disturbing. Teenaged rebellion is part of growing up and developing self-identity.

While Phillip W. Simpson’s Rapture Trilogy provides us with a good escapism story, it lacks the depth and breadth of realism to make it worth a second read. Though the main character is the picture of social isolation, he lacks the rebellion, “to liberate himself or herself from childhood dependency on parental approval for always being the "good child." (Carl Pickard, PhD., “Surviving (Your Child’s) Adolescence”, Psychology Today December 6, 2009). Neither does Aimi, the quintessential “good child”. I doubt whether the teen population which Simpson’s targets will identify with either character.





Tuesday, July 2, 2013

Tent City: No Malingering in These Hills


An Author Requested Review

Title: Tent City
Author(s): Kelly Van Hull
Publisher: Kelly Van Hull
Copyright: 2013
ISBN-10: 1482754533
ISBN-13: 978-1482754537
Format: ebook, paperback (340 pages)
Genre: Young Adult, Speculative Fiction
Part of Series: Yes
Rating: 4 out of 5 stars

Not Quite a Dream Come True

 Who hasn’t wanted to run away from home? Like most teenagers, I dreamed about freedom from parental rules and taking charge of my own life. However, none of those dreams included my parents telling me to run away or insisting I take my younger siblings with me. That would have turned the dream into a nightmare! Yet that is exactly what happens to 17-year-old Dani and her 5-year-old brother, Brody, in Kelly Van Hull’s novel, Tent City.  This young adult fiction weaves a story realistic enough to be believable with a dystopian future. The story, in first person point of view, tells how  the Army, renamed the Council, under the leadership of General Burke controls all resources to “protect” citizens from starvation after locusts destroyed most of the crops. And now they want to “protect” children between the ages of five and eighteen.

Van Hull captures our sympathy immediately with the opening line, “It feels a lot like the night my brother Drake died.” In one line Van Hull ties creates reader empathy as well a scene tension as Dani’s parents sit her at the kitchen table and tell her she needs to run away with her little brother. Uncle Randy, who’s “high up” in the Army, has warned them that the Council “fears if too many more deaths occur, the human population may be in danger of extinction.” The answer, of course, is to put the children in safety camps where procreation may be assured. Van Hull shows us lingering uncertainties through Dani’s statement, “The year they took over is when most people died. Doesn’t that seem weird to you?” Hesitant to take on the sole responsibility of her brother, she’s given a choice between hiding in the cellar and running off to hide in the Black Hills. Dani chooses the latter. But she isn’t some self-assured, arrogant teenager. She questions her ability to take care of Brody on her own and insists that her best friend, Kit, comes with them.

The Ride of a Lifetime

This fast-paced ride begins as Dani, Brody and Kit head for Black Hills on the family’s four-wheelers. As they follow a map Dani’s father marked to their cabin and Kit proves her value by being the only one who can actually read it. The plot is riveting, regardless of your age, as we follow the trio deep into the woods. Dani gets her four-wheeler stuck in the river and the group is rescued by a mysterious travelling teenager named Jack. While Kit is flirtatious, Dani is cautious and sends him on his way post-haste.  Dani and Kit create an interesting dichotomy of characters. Kit’s practical skills are coupled with playfulness and Dani’s guardedness is combined with curiosity. These contradictory skills come in handy when the trio reaches their destination, only to find the cabin already occupied and surrounded by a small city of tents.

Tent City is of full of dichotomies. There’s Bentley, the hard-nosed community leader and the previously mentioned, mild-mannered Jack. They obviously know each other and don’t like each other, but denied this to Dani. Jack and Bentley are as opposite as Kit and Dani. Where Bentley is a harsh, Jack is compassionate; where Jack focuses on helping others with his healing skills, Bentley focuses on fighting and conducting raids for supplies. They are an irresistible puzzle to Dani, who must find out the secrets which seem to surround them both.

Kelly Van Hull crafts a compelling story filled with puzzles and opposites. Who are Jack and Bentley and how do they know one another? How can they both have such exceptional yet opposite skills? What does the “spiritual awakening” after the locusts have to do with the Council’s control? How can Dani protect Brody when she feels barely about to take care of herself? Will Dani, Brody and Kit ever be able to bet back home? The ride is worthwhile, so read Tent City and learn, as Dani does, that answers sometimes yield more questions.